First draft/Evaluation
In our first draft our thriller was looking good except for a few significant errors which determined on if our thriller would be rated as high quality or low quality; for example there is a part where we jump straight from the party scene to Nortz walking away angrily but it dawned upon us that this was a bad edit because there is no way a member of the audience would be able to notice that Nortz had become angry and also it wouldn't make sense for him to all of a sudden go from a party and be confronted with a gun without a reason.
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